Elizabeth
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 Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:59 am Post subject: Efficiency - Discussion & Author's Notes |
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For any comments on the story.
Author's Notes: The subtitle of the story should make it fairly obvious what the initial inspiration for this was. I was reading Tell Tale Heart for some class in school, and I thought - hey, Tell Tale Pants would be a cute name for a diaper story.
At first, I was planning on making it a stand-alone story, with new characters, but as I was trying to figure out what kind of people I needed for the story, I realized I was basically just recreating the characters from Motivation, so I eventually gave in to reason and made it a sequel to that.
I liked the whole one-word-title thing I did with the first story, so I had to change the title, but I decided I could live with having my cool idea as a subtitle. I'm glad I did, because, cute as "The Tell Tale Pants" is, it doesn't fit the story nearly as well as the simplicity (and efficiency) of Efficiency.
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