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elizabeth.myfastforum.org An archive of my AB/DL stories.
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Elizabeth Site Admin

Joined: 30 Dec 2007 Posts: 172
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Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 3:01 am Post subject: Mel's Gift - Discussion & Author's Notes |
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For any comments on the story.
Author's Notes: Like a lot of my earlier stories, and quite a few of my newer ones, too, I guess, this is a story that is mostly about the nature of diaper stories. I hadn't yet quite figured out how to do that sort of thing without literally making it about a diaper story at that point.
It was also one of my first "twist" endings, and not a particularly great one at that. Really, by itself this story isn't anything special, but it works as a companion to the much better second story. And it was worth writing just because Mel is, basically, a prototype for Penni. Luckily, Penni daydreams about much more interesting things.
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lionheart8904

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I'm sure you could care less lol, but I just had to say that when you were describing Mel's social situation, that is exactly how I felt growing up until I hit about 15 and started to open up and this is the first time I've seen it written down the same as it was in my head.
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