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An archive of my AB/DL stories.
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Elizabeth
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Joined: 30 Dec 2007
Posts: 172
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 Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 2:20 am Post subject: The Danger of Hypnotic... - Discussion & Author's Notes |
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For any comments on the story.
Author's Notes: This was my first experience with writing in present tense. I'm not sure why I decided to write it like that... I think maybe just because the story itself wasn't particularly original, so I wanted to do something to set it apart, and I hadn't seen any other present tense diaper stories at the time. That part of the story still holds up pretty well, in my opinion, but I think I was trying too hard to be funny for a lot of it.
The basic idea for the story was inspired by various hypnosis files at Warp My Mind, and all of the ones mentioned in the story can be found there, or could back when the story was written. I have tried the incontinence file for myself, and I can say that, with patience and willingness, it can work.
The title of the story was a suggestion from my Daddy.
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MrAngel
Joined: 29 May 2008
Posts: 2
Location: England
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I love this story. Its great to see a story that manages to be both interesting and realistic. I actually found this by searching for the trigger phrase (as I'd previously met a few interesting people who were open enough to listen to those files and then list the triggers in their blogs)
I'm reading through some of your others now. Have you written any others with the hypnosis elements? (those are always my favourites) |
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Elizabeth
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Joined: 30 Dec 2007
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| Posted: Fri May 30, 2008 12:10 am Post subject: |
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I'm glad you liked it ^-^ I wrote this a long time ago, and people still pop up and tell me that it's their favorite of mine.
As for other stories with hypnosis, Skye's the Limit does have some parts about hypnosis. There are some mentions of hypnosis in Lies My Parents Told Me [Second Star to the Right], I think, but not very in depth or anything. There's also some hypnosis in A Mother's Love, which is in the Bygones story board, but the story isn't diaper related, so neither is the hypnosis. |
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baby summer
Joined: 13 May 2009
Posts: 1
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Hi
Loved the story, a nice little twist at the end. Any chance of developing the story line to have more punishment for Kelly or perhaps if she could turn the tables on Emily, perhaps not so much fun.
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